Hi, I was wondering if it was alright to delete your sandboxes on the Tribunal and Crill. The tribunal page itself has been updated and it pretty much up to standard, while all pages for individial members of the tribunal have been deleted already.
I have noticed a lot of your edits lack correct proncunciation, grammar and spelling. Like on the "Elderly Man" page I just corrected. You never start a sentenct with "Then", that's an adverb, and usually sentences don't begin with those. You also forgot to add a period at the end. Please do your best at learning this. If not, I may have to block you until you can learn how to correctly edit. It's pointless to make edits, if someone has to keep coming back to fix them/revert them/retype them, etc.
I already fixed it. Go look how I wrote it. And usually yes, you can begin a sentence with a preposition, but you have to be careful. Usually after a preposition, you would use a comma. Like "After that, Phoebe came to tell the old couple about the winning numbers". But like I said, I have already fixed it.
Scroll down and see the first change I made to it- you will see. I had to block for 1 month, you need to practice a bit more before making edits. Each edit you have made had been wrong and has had to be reverted. I am sorry, but hopefully you can learn to write a bit better.